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Karina Fabian's avatar

"atypically woo-woo" should be a technical term!

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Shannon Davies's avatar

Emily Metzger had me from the jump. There’s something so instantly compelling about her voice—it’s dry, weary, sharp-edged, but threaded with that quiet strength of someone who’s seen too much and survived it anyway. Her internal monologue walks this beautiful line between bitterness and biting humor, and it never feels performative. We feel her hauntedness (is that a word?) without you ever needing to spell it out. It’s deeply human and deeply real. The emotional truth of a soldier living with PTSD, reassignment, and walking into the unknown again feels grounded and unforced. Metzger isn’t playing the trauma card, she just is someone who’s lived it, and that restraint makes her all the more powerful. She's the kind of protagonist readers trust. The arrival sequence is especially vivid. I could feel the chop of the blades, see the dust, and sense that creeping isolation as Metzger touches down in this strange new place. The military details feel authentic without trying too hard. And once we reach the Medicine Wheel? Wow. That scene hums with slow-building dread. The stone circle is described in such a haunting, textured way. It chills in all the right ways. And that whispered voice? “Release them.” Literal goosebumps.

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