Great start, intrigued already! I like the combination of a military setting and an ancient site. Quite a bit of foreboding already. And the ambiguity of the dizziness: is it due to her medical issues, or is there something else going on...
So glad you enjoyed this! Yes, I had fun playing with the contrast between down-to-earth military characters and spooky paranormal events. And I love working those ambiguous moments into my stories: was that a "normal" headache or was Metzger experiencing a kind of sixth sense overload? I want the readers to judge that for themselves. But I do work in some more clues later.
"atypically woo-woo" should be a technical term!
It should!! :)
Great start, intrigued already! I like the combination of a military setting and an ancient site. Quite a bit of foreboding already. And the ambiguity of the dizziness: is it due to her medical issues, or is there something else going on...
So glad you enjoyed this! Yes, I had fun playing with the contrast between down-to-earth military characters and spooky paranormal events. And I love working those ambiguous moments into my stories: was that a "normal" headache or was Metzger experiencing a kind of sixth sense overload? I want the readers to judge that for themselves. But I do work in some more clues later.
Something about the name "Metzger" sounds good to me... can't quite put my finger on it...
Very fun read so far.
Great job with this Thomas! I’m intrigued
Thank you so much!
this is very fun :) I'm getting hints that someone has done their Graham Hancock homework? It promises to be fun!
Oh, I love it. I can't wait to read more!
Thank you!! I'm so glad you enjoyed it :)